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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2002-05-24 05:44 PM


I found you standing there
Waiting for me to come
Touch your hand
Lead you away from here
I saw what was written behind your eyes
My mind was overwhelmed by your thoughts
I never knew that you would become the one
As you release your hand from mine
I watch you walk away
The one
My one
Gone forever
As you were leaving
I felt you whisper in my ear
"I will always love you"

Love Always,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


© Copyright 2002 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-24 05:54 PM


Turning away,  tears falling,
feeling the fresh of a breeze
Hearing the thought, calling
within a moment, to sieze..

I will always love you....

I have said these words countless times...
even in the thought of leaving...leaving
behind a treasure...

Beautiful words written,  tender feelings
expressed...

Lovely write!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-05-24 05:59 PM


Very beautifully penned!
Enjoyed the read this evening..
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-05-24 06:55 PM


Ladycat darling girl this is absolutely beautiful your writing content and style consistently superb and this is as always absolutely perfect.

I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly superb, the flow is divine all the way through. This really is an excellent piece you have excelled yourself.

Wonderful writing utterly wonderful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

vandana
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4 posted 2002-05-24 06:56 PM


liked it
Nicole
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5 posted 2002-05-25 11:44 AM


I like this a lot, hon - it reminds me of a mutual friend of ours.  
ethome
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6 posted 2002-05-25 11:49 AM


Well done! A real pleasurable read!
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2002-05-25 12:37 PM


This is sad.
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-05-25 12:50 PM


sighing..I believe in "seizing the moment" if possible...

a beautiful message
M

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9 posted 2002-05-26 12:36 PM


What soft sadness. I understand this far too well…every word.
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