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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you are neon wax on my eyes I know the scent of your voice you speak whispers under my mind we make show me stories in sand our fire melts sand to glass and windows appear as our walls we turn on sun lights with mirrors and wear our armor inside out with the soft skin bare to arrows you weave me in your hair when I am liquid fingers I smear your lipstick ends then my smile mouth is your necklace ©Dark |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
each and every line speaks to me so softly, so incredibly gently but with such a way that gives me a mood...these are the ones I call "mood poems"...puts the reader into a certain unexplanable mood, that just feels good. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These are almost like Senryu thoughts strung together to make that very necklace... of liquid pearl. Wonderful. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms shadowy one...thank you sweet lady for your reads..and for the soft mood feels |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
morning ms sunshine.. thank you for the dawn smile...on my slender word stream here.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I think wearing a loved ones smile like a necklace is the most gorgeous keepsake of all you can possess forever! (big hugggssssss) may love forever write stories in the sand with you with happy endings, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-24-2002 08:23 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger If you say so, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...yes. *smiling here* ~Morning Hugs to you Dark~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you weave me in your hair when I am liquid fingers" that is fantastic! your words dance here.... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
DS~ Mmm...yummy. A cup of tea and your words are almost as good as the morning you just described here Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS Thanks for the sweet words with my coffee. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oh my..you have inspired an ocean of sensuality this morning..Goodness Dark one..makes me simmer on sigh high! More of that good stuff...yess. Sincerely, Reg |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very stimulating read....an enjoyment to say the least! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks friend poet, I appreciate you always Sy, you are a blessing with your reviews Enchanting one, slow hugs to your soul lady..thank you SEA, lil one, have missed your eyes thank you SmittyKitty, thanks babe, a pleasure to wear your eyes on my words Ms Martie, Good morning lady fair, coffee? dang wish I had been able to...maybe now ..thanks babe Regina, mmmm you make me think of such things..love the term..hope you write it out? simmer of sigh high..thanks hon for the reads. Ethome, humble thanks for the reads and comments |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ Pure vanilla-scented~ *Don't ask ...  But the compliment scale doesn't score much higher than this~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms marge thanks lady..have a wonderful weekend.. |
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Cirrus Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 55 |
This IS great DS... I really enjoyed |
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