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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-24 05:56 AM

Soft White

I have but one thing of yours in real,
the softness of memories
that lay against cheek.
It absorbs my tears in missing you,
receives the goodnight kisses
awaiting your lips.
Its freshness reminds me of
the nearness of you
crisp to my eyes,
soft to my heart.
I hold you in my hand
when I place it in mine
and in it, I gather the feel of yours
that remains with me always.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-05-24 06:28 AM

missing is a terrible emotion

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-05-24 10:03 AM

this makes my eyes sting...extremely emotional write....*big hugs for you*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-05-24 10:09 AM

Maureen,
A soft and lovely write.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-05-24 11:17 AM

Oh you are such a romantic Maureen! Lovely read! !

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-05-24 11:34 AM

WynterGal~

'the softness of memories
that lay against cheek.'

soft indeed~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-05-24 11:35 AM

Perfectly said from a heart that truly feels things deeply...hugs...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-05-24 12:27 PM

Damn, ah wish I'd thought t' call y' WynterGal.

Summer Squirrel

....... oh yeh, the poem! Loved i'!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2002-05-24 01:01 PM

passing shadows ..it's an emotion that just makes loving one more intense *s

SEA..thank you. it's not meant to be sad..just meant to let someone know I have something I hold dearly...that gives me sweet memories when he is not near.

Seymour, thank you

e...I think you know me well *s thank you!

Marge~ thank you dear friend, there is something about having a piece of soft belonging to another to lean against...
when missing him..

M

Karen,thank you...Hope you are lowering that wall day by day

hugs
M

bsquirrel..oh she was my longest and dearest poet friend on the net..she called me that ages ago on here..she has it copyrighted SquirrelyQ..haven't you gone on vacation yet?
How can I miss you if you never leave

bye
M

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

9 posted 2002-05-24 01:01 PM

Such sweet sad images you write. Lovely.

Nan

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

10 posted 2002-05-24 01:12 PM

I love this write, Maureen....
sometimes memories mellow with age.

~ many hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-05-24 01:46 PM

Awright ... one more thing before ah go, Maureen. You must -- you are REQUIRED to -- write a poem with "How can I miss you if you never leave" in it. That just rocks.

Bye!

back

-me

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-24-2002 01:46 PM).]

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