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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-05-24 04:56 AM



All Of What Used To Be

It can be so frustrating
I was feeling fraught
So anxious and tense
Writing came to nought

I look out the window
To a bright sunny day
So why all this blank
Finding nothing to say

Thoughts ticking over
Mind here and there
I view my old poetry
Some in need of repair

The persistant block
Is not very amusing
Heart wants to write
My mind kept refusing

Head from the clouds
Came back to reality
So much was written
All of what  used to be

Hope ©2002

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-05-24 08:20 AM




(big huggsssssss) Oh Hope, you are never alone, sweet friend, we all have this kind of block every now and then and it is natural! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous poem just as I know you will write many more lovely poems to follow, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-05-24 08:51 AM


Thank you Noah , your reply was very thoughtful and comforting , when I am feeling this way , I do often go off on those sentimantal , nostalgic paths
Hope

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3 posted 2002-05-24 12:32 PM


AhHope~
You can come walk the 'sentimental path' here among friends anytime~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-05-24 12:59 PM


Go out into that bright sunshine, and forget the used to be. Make some now. You'll soon have much to write!

Nan

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