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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-05-23 09:45 PM


You opened up a heart, closed for many years
I don't know how you did it, I had too many fears
Something deep inside of me, said it was alright
As you came to see me, each and everynight

You made me feel feelings, I never felt before
Each time I was with you, my love grew even more
I did not think anything, would ever tear us apart
The love that I felt for you, it came right from my heart

As I sit here by myself, each and everyday
I keep hoping and praying, everything will turn out okay
No longer do I feel the love, I once felt from you
I only know my love for you, it is still so true

Even though I have told myself, I no longer care
To tell you how I really feel, I just wouldn't dare
For you to just turn around, and walk right out the door
Makes me want to just close my heart, like I did before
By Sue 5-23-02


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2002-05-23 10:10 PM


Sue...

this is so heartbreaking...but i know
the pain you describe all too well...
heart hugs hon...i hope things turn out
"ok" for you...till then keep writing and
remember many people are here for you.
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Balladeer
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 2002-05-23 10:15 PM


This is indeed heartwrenching, Sue...and something many people face. When faced with rejection, do you keep searching or give up and protect yourself from future pain?

YOU KEEP GOING!!!!!

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2002-05-23 10:45 PM


Deer's right, Sue... You're a strong lady - Pick up and keep on going..
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-05-23 10:59 PM


Big hugs to you Sue!
This is a heart breaking write...
things will get better.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-05-23 11:39 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very heartbreaking, sweet friend, I know how hard it must feel to endure such pain and fear embracing more but I know you will find true love out there, you just have to get up and keep going for you are destined to find it! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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