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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-05-23 05:07 PM


Take me to Paris, let us go
and step into another land
of romance, beauty, stylish love
together walking hand in hand.

We'll sip cafe and eat croissants
gazing toward the Eifel tower
stroll in the moonlight happily
cuddle amidst warm rain showers.

The River Seine is glistening
and ooh la la is not a dream
As lovers form the cities glow
while life is never as it seems.

Let's drink  champagne, the finest one
and pretend love is truly real
You have the power in your hands
and all I want to do is feel.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2002-05-23 05:10 PM


Wow! That sounds like fun! I was in France once but never made it up from the south coast so I missed Paris, always regretted that.. You have made this so alive with your wishes through settings!  Good writing!
I'll go break my piggy bank open and see if I have enough money to take you!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-05-23 05:28 PM


smiling at E's response...Cat..these are lovely moments you write about.
If only...

hugs
M

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3 posted 2002-05-23 05:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too wish for this dream to come true for you! (kiss on cheek) May you find the love of your life soon and forever share every bella norte with him, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Riding
4 posted 2002-05-23 05:53 PM


Thanks for the read. I really like this one

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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-05-23 06:05 PM


Yes I hope to make it to this very romantic city of lights once more...the sooner the better...James
Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2002-05-23 06:10 PM


This is so smooth, and nice. I loved the images, and especially the last two lines.

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7 posted 2002-05-23 06:56 PM


Sandra....me thinks there is a full moon
rising over the tower this eve....

A beautiful poem of a place where love is
art and art is love....

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8 posted 2002-05-23 06:56 PM


Ahh, you made me sit for a minute and just daydream of what could happen in Paris, and even if it didn't what a lovely dream.  Cat, this was beautiful writing, as you held me in thought and kept me there.

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9 posted 2002-05-23 07:15 PM


Let's drink  champagne, the finest one
and pretend love is truly real
You have the power in your hands
and all I want to do is feel.

Beautiful poem, sweetest dream...hold on to it tight.

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10 posted 2002-05-23 07:29 PM


Deep and sad and cool. I like the idea of stylish love, too.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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11 posted 2002-05-24 03:05 PM


let's go. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
12 posted 2002-05-24 03:10 PM


Let's drink  champagne, the finest one
and pretend love is truly real
You have the power in your hands
and all I want to do is feel.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sandra, loved this one...
especially liked the last line!
..'all I want to do is feel.'
I know exactly what you mean here...
Wonderful way to express it.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
13 posted 2002-05-24 04:05 PM


seems to me like you're feeling quite a bit, you romantic you.
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