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Listen Dear Heart
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Listen Dear Heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Listen dear heart and you will know true words of this poet in flow Be still my love and you shall see the vision of once meant to be. Take in your mind a lover’s kiss lingering, longing, touching of this Keep in your heart a tune of song Listen dear heart, listen once long Feel the warm of snow in melt Feel the yearning of feelings felt Let the waters flow ever so pure Listen dear heart, let love endure As songs will sing the tune of day and melodies ring within this say One heart shall beat to be once more Listen dear heart, cast us ashore [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-23-2002 05:09 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) This is powerfully said, sweet friend, may your lose always have all ears and listen to your hearts desires! (sigh) I believe to listen attentively to the heart is one of the most powerful parts of faithful love, sweet friend, may you and your love forever hear what each other has to say, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Listen dear heart ....ah yes, well written....the heart can be such a friend but also a treacherous foe....but this is lovely work! |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Magnus Hi there, this is lovely, your rhyme and flow in this cannot be bettered. This is wonderful a pleasure to read Mum isn’t very well today, but I know if she were she would be replying to this beauty, you know both mum and I adore your writing, and I think Emma has also picked up the fact you are a terrific writer   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Another awesome poet that I've missed during my absense. Beautifully written I know Karate, Kung Fu, and 47 other dangerous words |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing Magnus...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*Sigh!* ~Did you just catch the scent of White Shoulders?~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Tremendously beautiful, achingly romantic, poem. This is just such wonderful writing!!!!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like this. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ I bow gracefully to the King of romance......lovely heart shinning here.....") Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry I love 'listening' to your words of love and romance, so very soothing and beautiful are your words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
wonderful write! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy, this has got to be one of your best. You are inarguably one of the best writers on this site. You use your pen like a master craftsman, the precision of each word, the flow of meter and rhyme cannot be bettered. Your words always manage to drench me with wonder today they have carried me into that place of heart, where tears are simply echoes and love always flows in a stream of divinity. You manage to release the light so it covers me with it’s healing aura of giving. This is utterly utterly wonderful I love it utterly. Thank you darling boy Since I didn’t get the chance to reply to this yesterday I’m doing it today. It’s wonderful. And thank you for your little cheer up rhyme it was so very sweet of you, thank you muchly. Big smiles and a fluttering of eyelashes from us all. In which case since Emma has eyelashes that are so long that she has to tip her head back to open her eyes, and Krissy’s are so thick if she wears mascara she needs a forklift to open hers. You’ll probably have a hurricane warning, I have normal eyelashes, so it’s not my fault  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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