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Thoughts Number 3
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Thoughts Number 3 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Hermit I, Thoughts are cleansed without a cry, No wild geese, No soft fleece, Comfortless sincerity, No airplane, No fast train, Solitary loyalty, Old values Without news, Laughs echoes not through the sky, Hermit I, Hidden so grief comes not nigh. Gloom inspired by THOUGHTS III By Zhang Jiuling |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* This suits me perfectly....I very much need to be a hermit so that I cannot be touched by feelings...Very well done... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some of the best poetry comes from reading others... then sharing. You share well. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thank You for not hiding your words..... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Even we hermits feel though...I enjoyed this sir.  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this one. It kept the flavor of the Chinese poets, but done in your own fashion. Nice. Nan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seems like an escape to think this way and it is to a certain extent. However, that need to express the poetic language of the heart never dies so out you come to seek our eyes and replies.....good write!! |
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