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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
As I walk alone I am left wondering sharing no thoughts the emptiness screaming glossed eyes taunted by the "losing the battle" feel. I cannot be warmed today no memories can soothe the pain no balancing of the mind. Today, I cannot rise behind the glass. ~A~ [This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (05-23-2002 09:25 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Here's hoping to a swift recovery, and a better tomorrow... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alicethruglass This is an Alice through looking glass, enjoyed. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Ah yes...this feeling I know so well...I will join you but not behind the glass for my new wall is much thicker than that.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooo! Ahhh! She said burn ... together. |
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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi |
Wonderful imagery. I loved it. Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Sunshine theres always a tomorrow to look forward to *s thank you Seymour..yes she is looking... always *s Karen, I hope your wall isn't too thick to be knocked down  bsquirrel...ah ha!!!!  CowgirlFreedom17, thank you for reading *s ~A~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Today, I cannot rise behind the glass. Having a bit of a time with it myself today. Good write, I liked it alot. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
You can! Peace.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Duncan, thank you..yes some days I almost think I am in the cracks of life... stuck *s Lauren, today may be a better day..the sun is still shining *s thank you ~A~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I cannot be warmed today no memories can soothe the pain no balancing of the mind. Today, I cannot rise behind the glass. Sometimes that reflection in the glass is a pretty miserable one huh? |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
well it's not so much the reflection as is the actuality at the moment. *s But what's that saying...once at the bottom, the only way is up???? thank you ~A~ |
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