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MilchstrabeStern
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since 2002-05-19
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0 posted 2002-05-23 02:42 AM



My beliefs are lies
I thought i saw it
Love in your eyes
Was it only my reflection?

Yes, they were my beliefs, yes they were a lie, yet now i can see the truth, anda all i can do is cry....

She did not share the same feelings that i did. But, me, her, and 2 other friends, are probally the best friends this world can provide, and i will never take advantage of that. This rejection doesnt hurt as bad as i thought, for i know, shes always a friend, and a good one at that. She always has a hand to hold, and always a smile to give. They are the worlds best friends, today was my last day of school, we spent the entire day together and watched 3 movies. We had a great time.....I thank them for their love, that will never die. I thank them for being great friends, that will love me forever. And who i will love forever.

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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2002-05-23 07:42 AM


Well, eyes being the mirror of the soul,
It probably was just a reflection.

Would have liked to see more poem
And less prose rant, but emotion is difficult to bottle.

Gloom

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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2 posted 2002-05-23 07:44 AM


I like the professor's reply!
When it comes to love it's easy to lie to oneself!
I appreciated the story!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2002-05-23 11:59 AM


I have lied to myself alot about love...I have learned not to look for it again...dreams are not reality...very well written...yes...love really does hurt..
Skyfire
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Riding
4 posted 2002-05-23 03:12 PM


Love is hard to taste
For the taste is so sweet
and trusting and yet...
Just never stop loving


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