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TriXter
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The One

0 posted 2002-05-22 11:34 PM



You in my pillow for all its worth yet
you, always around and you create the set
from witch i walk and sleep
you the only girl id ever treat

not knowin whats up and down
not knowin what you look like with a frown
lookin at life through a crystal ball
while i walk off and start to fall

when i hit who knows what to expect
my borken heart only one suspect
shoulder i need while i sob
my only soul a criminal did rob

on my bed starin at youre photo, not knowin what to do
cause the only person id ever start to love was you
now look at ya dancein, and prancin and flashin' youre smile
i fall in sorrow, and this may take a while
all this darkness i see all stright ahead
ill just let it go by in my tear soaked bed.

The man of few words...

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1 posted 2002-05-22 11:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I know this feeling so sorrow all too well and I too yearn to have my dream girl Joanna in my arms so never again would I have to cry on walls for her! (sad sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CowgirlFreedom17
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Mississippi
2 posted 2002-05-23 01:42 AM


I loved this. I can relate to it. Wonderful write..it really touches my heart.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

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