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powerofthysword
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA

0 posted 2002-05-22 08:15 PM


Thinking of you keeps me entranced
in a passionate world of fantasy
with desires burning deeply and
ceaseless emotions held at bay
The discernment of knowing that
unless all inhibitions subside
my dreams would not prosper and
in my head they will stay
I once thought I was forever cursed
to walk amongst this earth alone
adrift through time searching
for radiance in an aura of unlight
A veracious effigy of a fallen angel
abeyant in a mystical veil of clouds
though vigilant to the world below
has no apparent gift of sight
Forged with the same steel as
the sword sworn to protect it
my heart was by far emptier than
the spurious smile on my face
You pierced this impervious fortress
armed only with a promise
gallantly I will grasp our relationship
with an exuberant embrace
Until I first endured the frigid road
that led me to your presence
I may never have felt your warmth
that I cherish and faithfully respect
An inseparable union will enhance
the very lives we aspire to fulfill
as we create elegant memories
upon which we can one day reflect
I now stand steadfast and bold
against the immeasurable distance
the dense fog once before me
is merely an apparition of a mist
My soulless passages of the past
have become a vehement quest
your undying love bestows me hope
and the inner strength to persist


© Copyright 2002 Paul V. Campos - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2002-05-22 08:25 PM


Powerofthysword, this is an extremely awesome write and you hold much talent. It is cleary obvious in the way you painted this picture of your heart. This is outstanding and will look forward to reading more of yours

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-22 08:26 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Paul, this is a fabulous debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) May you always be embraced by loves true happiness, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Paul, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-05-22 08:39 PM


Hello Paul!  Welcome to Passions...This is a splendid entrance post!....I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets!
Relax, make yourself at home, and enjoy!
Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Enchantress/Nancy Lee
Moderator/Passions in Poetry.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-05-22 09:13 PM



Welcome to Passions!  I think from what I see as your Entrance post, that you're going to like it here!  If you have any questions, just look up a friendly Moderator, and if we don't know the answer, we will surely find someone who does have the answer!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


powerofthysword
Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA
5 posted 2002-05-22 10:14 PM


Thanx alot Saunni for that wonderful compliment, I do have quite a few more poems
I will share with all of you soon. I saw your
profile, and you sure are pretty.

powerofthysword
Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA
6 posted 2002-05-22 10:16 PM


Why thank you Noah, I really appreciate your
kind words and I am sure all of you will
inspire me and help bring out my best work.
You have a very beautiful heart yourself my
friend, and I will share more of my poems
soon.

powerofthysword
Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA
7 posted 2002-05-22 10:20 PM


WOW! I feel honored that you sent me that
wonderful artwork with my first poem, I can't
thank you enough Enchantress. I already feel
like a part of this wonderful family, and I
can't wait to grow with all of you spiritually and intellectually. Thanks again
for making me feel so welcome to your
community.

powerofthysword
Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA
8 posted 2002-05-22 10:22 PM


Hi Sunshine, I love your name! I had a dog
named sunshine a while ago and I sure miss
her. I already feel welcome as I could
possibly hope to feel.

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