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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-05-22 06:17 PM


I wish before the end of time
to take you in my roam
Within the heart and soul of me
in carriage far from home

I let the spring of summer’s morn
come to the meadow high
I gave the lawn this flower bloom
in moments of the sigh.

Into the wait of yearn in heart
where rubies polished gleam
at sound of open gate remain
in flow of summer’s stream

Where blossoms fall as white of snow
into the arms of green
and lover’s laugh in stride of joy
when shining eyes then sheen

Till moon in full does bring to dawn
and wake the morning sun
shadows then fall in climb of light
as two hearts beat as one




[This message has been edited by Magnus (05-22-2002 09:08 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-05-22 06:27 PM


beautiful, but I live in the shadows, Barry so I would love this.

*s

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Magnus
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2 posted 2002-05-22 06:42 PM


M.

Shadows are many things...

Our past...  Our sanctuary....  Our inner
self where only we go...  places or persons
who remain over us...

So many variations....  

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3 posted 2002-05-22 08:49 PM


Where blossoms fall as white of snow
into the arms of green
and lover’s laugh in stride of joy
when shining eyes then gleam
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mmmm, *sigh*...love this Barry!
Sure do!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-05-22 09:45 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, just the thought of meadows as white as snow in spring made me sigh happily! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-05-22 09:47 PM


as calming and cool
as summer breeze on a freshly wetted and clean skin

standing there,
drinking it in, and enjoying it all
tSR

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6 posted 2002-05-22 10:05 PM


Striking imagery. The purr on the tigerlily!
ThisDiamond

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7 posted 2002-05-22 10:10 PM



Behind the garden wall I hide
'neath ivy twine's embrace
till the step of you shall come
and I shall see your face

thus the fresh of garden's scent
fills the air with glee
till the breath of you shall come
into the heart of me...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-22-2002 10:11 PM).]

jwesley
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8 posted 2002-05-22 10:18 PM


wonderful my friend, and let's hear it for shadows...not to hide in, but from which to see...


jwesley

Martie
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9 posted 2002-05-22 10:25 PM


Barry.

You wear romance, and it fits so beautifully!

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10 posted 2002-05-24 06:22 AM


and you know the shadows like this one very much!
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11 posted 2002-05-24 09:23 AM


Oh Barry, this is so beautiful. I really like this.
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