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When Angels Fly

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Marge Tindal
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Out across my mid-of-night
I felt an angel taking flight
So softly in her fluttered wake
She leaves a memory for my sake~

That's how it is with angelic winging
They leave a song that just needs singing
So it is with a tender sigh
We harmonize a melodious goodbye~

Sometimes a memory humbles me
Sending me urgently to my knees
When an angel on her earthly roam
says goodbye in sweetly sung song~

Just before she leaves my view
she winks and says, 'I'll remember you'
And I release one small tear
moisturizing a remember
of when she was here~

'I'll come again to touch your sigh
for that's how it is, when angels fly'



~For anyone and everyone who has ever felt
the flutter of angels on the wing~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge...I think I felt one just now while reading this.  Hugs!
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Margie girl darling sister of my soul this is sooooooooo incredible beautiful. The touch of this is utterly amazing, Iím awe-struck by this wonderful piece. You know I love this donít you. I can taste the wonder in this, I can smell the angel in the air, even hear an echo of the angelís song.

Utterly utterly perfect poetry, you never cease to amaze me with your skill and your way of writing is always a touch of heaven.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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Ah, Martie took my response!  So, make that two!
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Oh Marge, I love the little angel. And, the poem is just beautiful.
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Very nice Marge...James
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Marge:  A dear poem and I not only think I feel angels flutter, I also dream I am flying with them.  

Betty Lou Hebert

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Marge,  NO ONE,  yep...NO ONE writes of
angels as delicately and beautifully as
you...
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enjoyed
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Wow, I am new here and I can already tell you
will be one of my favorites by the way you write.
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Beautiful Marge, and I too have felt the flutter of angel wings....love this one.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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"That's how it is with angelic winging
                         They leave a song that just needs singing
                                 So it is with a tender sigh
                           We harmonize a melodious goodbye~"

I always wondered about that Marge.....but hey, you always have all the answers!
A real nice feel to this one Marge...soothing!!
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======================================
'I'll come again to touch your sigh
for that's how it is, when angels fly'

======================================

Oh Margie girl, touching poem, very inspiring and so beautiful...thanks so much for just being you, a most beautiful spirit ~HUGS~ Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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Auntie Margie girl, You know Iím going to say this is Incredibly beautiful. Absolutely exquisite writing, I really do love your work, you are a writer of extraordinary skill, and this is fabulously wonderful. I do believe I feel the flutter of angel wings this really is so beautiful it reached right into me.

Thank you for the gift of beauty in this write of angelic heart, you have surpassed yourself


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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MartieSis~
You know that I know ... when we listen, we hear~

OhMarshaLove~
You sweet lady you !
I love the thought that you'd hear the echo of her songs~

Karilea~
You share thoughts with the nicest lady~
Thank you~

SweetSue~
Thanks sweet gal~

JamesMichael~
I appreciate your replies always~

BettyLou~
I have no doubt you soar with angels in your dreams sweet friend~
*hugs*

Magnus~
Thank you dear fellow~
You always touch my heart~

VanDana~
Thanks so much sweet gal~

PowerOfThySword~
Thank you so very much.  I know you will enjoy your stay in Passions circle of poets and friends.
WELCOME~

Enchantress~
Yes, I can definitely believe you have.
Thanks sweetie~

ETHome~
Thanks my friend~
Lord knows I don't have even half the answers, but I'm always listening for those angelic songs~

TracieHon~
It's so sweet to share with you.
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~


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KrissyDear~
I must have been writing my responses to the previous replies when you posted yours~

Darling girl ... it's so good to see you and I thank you for your sincerity from the heart of my little bottom~
Love ya'
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Very beautiful, Marge! Lovely!
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*shaking head in awe* how do you do it? I love this! I'm glad it didn't slip out into the archives without me .
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Marge,
All the poems you write are special...and some are very special and some are above very special...this is one of them..

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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You are so very talented, Miss Marge

This is beautiful, as is everything you write.

'I'll come again to touch your sigh
for that's how it is, when angels fly'

Stunning. Really.

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

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Denise~
Thank you so much sweet friend~heart:

Dixie~
Such a lovely thing to say ... thank you~

Dan~
Sending *hugs* of endearment for you my friend~

IceQueen~
I certainly thank you so much for the sweet reply~
Thank you for reading me~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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This one fluttered right into my heart... it's a beauty, Marge... I'm so glad I didn't miss it! *S*
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"I'll come again to touch your sigh"

A wonderful poem with a wonderful finale..
Marge Tindal
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SweetSuthernFriend~
Thank you so much honey~
I'm just awfully glad you didn't miss it too~
I know how you are about these sort of things~

Nan~
And you too my sweet friend~

BIG HUGS to both of you ... what a lovely *kiss* goodnight~

My e-mail server was under maintenance since last evening .... so if you've written me ... be patient .... I'll play catch up when they get the old server to Maryland and configure it to deliver the old mails~


I don't wanna grow up to be a 'techie'~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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moisturizing a remember
~~~~~~~~~
What a lovely and descriptive phrase.  talk about painting a word picture...
~*~
your work humbles me
you are the yardstick I use
to measure against

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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