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Alicethruglass
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0 posted 2002-05-22 11:50 AM




Too tired
Feelings draining
Catch Twenty-Two rising
Simplyfying stead of needing
For you


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Aimster
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1 posted 2002-05-22 12:49 PM


good write! i've known this feeling a
time or two and yes it can be very
draining indeed...hang in there. take
care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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2 posted 2002-05-22 01:11 PM


Damn, don't I know it!  
bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-05-22 01:14 PM


Hey, Alice.

I like yr name -- and ah enjoy yr 'try.

Mikey

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2002-05-22 02:04 PM


Simplifying...a good idea. I enjoyed the read.
Alicethruglass
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5 posted 2002-05-22 04:15 PM


Amy...I'm hanging  as there is not much choice at the moment *s thank you
~A~


Duncan, gets to you some days  doesn't it ...thank you *s

Hey squirrelyQ, thank you
Midnitesun, sometimes I simplify my trying ..life is  difficult enough as it is.
*s  thank you for reading and responding
~A~
  

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