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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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~Long Enough~ If the world stopped turning long enough for me to look high in the sky Would I find our names written in stars ink...just getting ready to dry The heavens...would they tell of our story, painting in colors hue Or would the sun show us all the wonder of our love...the sky in shades of blue If the earth stopped spinning long enough for me to look deep into black space Would I see the echoes and traces of your sweet beautiful face Would it tell me we were destiny...that we were meant to be The wind...would it become warmer, and show me that you and I are for an eternity If the universe stopped moving long enough for me to see if you would be with me forever Would my heart then rest easier...knowing we'd always be together The ocean...with all it's powerfulness and glory rising in tides just for me and you Would all these things declare our love true? We don't need no magic star dust or breathtaking sky to show us the love we know is real We just have to look into our hearts...there and only there is the answers to how we feel When I look into your eyes, all I need to know is there When you tell me you love me...I know you honestly care So I ask you...do you know I love you so much That I'd be lost without your gentle touch And that you are the best thing that's ever happened to me You chased away the pain, you set my spirit free No magical words can say what my heart has already not So many things in life and love your beauty and grace to me has taught So close your eyes and wish upon a star Know that in reality I am really not that far I'm right inside your heart, and that's where I'll always be When you open your eyes...I'll be there loving you by your side, from now until eternity "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (05-22-2002 09:15 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aimster, Well if that doesn't make a dent nothing will, enjoyed. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hmmm, is someone in love?  This verse just kicks up a pile of flowers.'nother words, enjoyed! Mike She said burn ... together. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wish that I could write in those long lines like you do. . . your heart shows, as always. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
I am amazed at the way you express your thoughts, this poem is very well written and every word you use fits perfectly. You are a true poet. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Amy, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may the promise and wish always shine and be written in the stars above and radiate with a warmth of true love to last forever! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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