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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-05-21 10:37 PM





For a moment

Might one take but a moment brief
to think of one, and bring relief
worrisome matters, they should fade
when cast upon, by eyes of jade

To think of one, to bring a smile
worrisome matters, then gone awhile
when cast upon, by eyes of blue
this is then what you can do

Worrisome matters, tears to hide
when cast upon, by eyes of brown
this is then what goes around
when a circle is formed oh so wide

When cast upon, by eyes of the world
this is what shall be, all sails unfurled
when a circle of hands reach out for you
and lift you up, these moments through

So for a moment, for a moment brief
breathe a soft deep sigh of relief
so that worrisome matters may fall behind
when caught up in our circles kind

~*~

Dedicated to all of Passions
Passionate Poets
That care for one another



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-21 10:48 PM


Karilea...from one who cares to the Queen of
compassion and caring....

Thank You ever so much for a beautiful
thought and a most beautiful poem...

Martie
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2 posted 2002-05-21 10:55 PM


Karilea

This kind of circle is made of pure gold, as is your heart, sweet friend.

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3 posted 2002-05-21 11:08 PM


A lovely write that encompasses what I have seen in so much compassion at this place.
You describe it well in this verse.

Merci
Eternity

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4 posted 2002-05-21 11:11 PM


So for a moment, for a moment brief
breathe a soft deep sigh of relief
so that worrisome matters may fall behind
when caught up in our circles kind
=================================

"may the circle be unbroken"

"Ive been down this road forever and the time has come to circle back home."
Tom Kimmel

love this intention dear poetess K

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5 posted 2002-05-21 11:18 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I am so lucky also to be surrounded by you and so many caring and compassionate friends, sweet friend, I used to think I would never ever be loved, now I have been proven wrong! (sigh) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-21 11:23 PM


This is indeed a wide friendship circle we have formed over this "cyber" space and into the real world, sharing cares, prayers tears, fears. Rare hearts united against the cold night.

Thank you Karlea, you have said it well and with such kindness.

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Suetang
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7 posted 2002-05-21 11:27 PM


Hello Karilea

Your words were so very moving and so heartfelt.  I have always felt that if my words can help or touch the hearts of others then that makes it so worthwhile for me and I'm sure many other agree with your lovely words.  It's amazing how much power can be found within the written word.

Take care......Sue

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8 posted 2002-05-21 11:30 PM


Thank you. We have a great circle here, one that encompasses so many giving hearts and minds. It's the biggest Love circle I've ever been inside.
Bridget Shenachie
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9 posted 2002-05-21 11:34 PM


Beautiful poem, our dear caring Karilea!  Thank you for writing it.

Shenachie

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10 posted 2002-05-21 11:36 PM


Karilea, I pray this circle of friendship here at Passions is never ever broken.  Many personal bonds of love and trust have been made here in the pages of blue.  Beautiful write.
~Heart-hugs~
   Nancy

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11 posted 2002-05-21 11:51 PM


So many people here have been helped or have had their burdens lightened by the comapssion and understanding of others...you say it well, Sunshine
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12 posted 2002-05-22 01:03 AM


Thank you for sharing this lovely poem, Karilea..we are really a family in the truest sense of the word.
To me...family is more about caring than about blood...and I know that we all have found a lot of caring here...due in no small part to yourself.

~ hugs from a sister

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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13 posted 2002-05-22 09:37 AM


Said so well by someone who's always one of the very first to hold out hand and heart to help. *S* Beautiful, Sunshiney one. *S*
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14 posted 2002-05-22 09:42 AM


Sunshine,
A soft and lovely message, enjoyed.

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15 posted 2002-05-22 09:56 AM


Kari darling sister of my heart, this is utterly utterly delightful. Really lovely circle of friendship, so often when the world seems too big a place I look for you a smiling happy face. Wonderful writing, as always you delight when you write, and when you write with friendship you shine even brighter than normal

You know I utterly utterly love this one


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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16 posted 2002-05-22 09:08 PM


This is a ray of sunshine,

Sandra

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17 posted 2002-05-23 11:18 PM


One heartfelt dedication and an equally heartfelt poem - You're an endless ray of Sunshine, ya know??..
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