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Tender Thoughts |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Another summary of how events pass tender moments become faint echos of pasts new populations grow in places unneeded birth control unheeded or never heard of. young fill parental shoes one is born, so departs another. Cruelity has it that some bare brands belong to owners in distant lands children here are born free but there, tasks are deligated hands get scraped, their like is religated to moments not long after wild births likenesses fill harsh realities surrounded by statistics of authorities birth continues we spread to billions parental shoes wear down one enters the scene, another departs tender moments become reflections of destiny or another summary of how events really pass. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-21-2002 09:27 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you for reminding me how precious these children all are, and how lucky we are. There is so much in the world that I cannot understand. Great write. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless all the children of the world, sweet friend, my heart too is with them all that they can all follow their dreams and learn from loving parents the true joys of life! (sigh) This is so very tender, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
interesting ideas, taken in an interesting direction. good write! -Dave |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
its to a precious 'commodity' not to be taken for granted [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-23-2002 12:11 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes, a precious gift to say the least....this is very well presented!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks for sharing ethome  |
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