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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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*~I Could~* I could gift you a dance of shimmering hips Dance over your sighs with my fingertips Take all your thoughts and magic them away Show you how delightfully I can play Reveal to you wonders that you so desire Skim over your soul in a wave of fire All this I can do to draw your soul to me Without even a word being whispered softly I could add some spice to your mind as you rest Give you a reason to take part in a quest Bewitch you with touches that inflame you Sprinkle your soul with some sparkling dew Wrest from your heart these actions of heat Surge through your blood, feeding it’s beat All this I could do with nothing at all Without even trying I could make you fall I could waltz in your mind driving you mad Wishing and wanting to be bold and bad I’d wander through caverns calling your name Sighing and whispering as you go insane You know I can take you to desire’s place Stir touches inside that will recall my trace All this I can do with a nuance of fire Without even speaking I can take you higher Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
With these words, y' have!  She said burn ... together. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Somebody please call the fire department.. My monitor is on fire....and my comp is starting to smoke.......Youch, the keyboard is hot.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, this is blazing! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You very well could, and you very well do... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marsha, this is awesome just awesome. You go girl! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Dance over your sighs with my fingertips.. I wish I could write of love this well... beautiful! ~A~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha... sweet sis, the first time you showed me this...i thought it was very good... now upon reading it again and reflecting, i have much more to say...this is just stunningly beautiful sis...amazing imagery woven through pure lines of magic...your poetry always is wonderful, but sometimes you go above and beyond... this is one of those times. hugs and much love you to you! amy "you can't stop |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
cover me with the sheen of satin bind me with the coat of a madman and drive me craaaaaaaaazy Maaaaaaaasha! I have no doubt that you, without even trying hard can turn any man's world upside down. JkF *smiling at ya* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...and what a way to go!!! Me thinks you're gonna create a lot of "beggars" with this one Marsha...very well written and emoted. jwesley |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Ah, Marsha...you never change...your loving words just spill forth from your heart to overflowing...I love it...thank you for being you... |
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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi |
Wow~ I love the combinations of actions and "magical" words. Great job! Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Reads serious to me. Vivacious and charming. And the rhyming is alarming. You are a femme fatale my friend. Wonderful write. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful images used as illustrations for emphasis.......you're getting so good as you waltz through my mind with these intense passionate lines!! |
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