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kinson
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0 posted 2002-05-21 07:11 PM


Under this dark sky
I wonder if your looking too
The moon is full
Just like my heart
Now that i have you
This endless quest is ended now
Despite others deciet
No longer will I search
For in you I feel complete
Angel of redemption
Stumbled into me
In your eyes are the answers
My future yet to be
As I watch the sun rise
Wonder if your looking too
The sun is brilliant like my heart
Now that I have you



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Suetang
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1 posted 2002-05-21 07:45 PM


Hello kinson

This is the first piece I have read of yours and I certainly wasn't disappointed.  Your words were filled with an honest love and deep devotion for someone very special.  You painted a beautiful picture with your words and I'll look forward to reading more.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

kinson
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2 posted 2002-05-21 07:53 PM


thank you sue, im very glad you enjoyed it

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3 posted 2002-05-22 09:29 AM


I love the title of this... it captures so well the heightened senses we have when our heart is happy. *S* Nice writing, kinson... I enjoyed.
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-05-22 09:33 AM


kinson
Well done, enjoyed.

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