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In Want of Treasured Much
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In Want of Treasured Much |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A sun in rise upon the Glen, In search of now, in quest of when A light of day in course of veins, in still of night as softness rains. As moon above becomes the light and stars in love return the night When whispers flow in slight of breeze and lovers take a moment seize A sun in flame to quench desire, a number’s game in tune of lyre A walk at dusk in search of path, a talk in lust within the bath. As bodies meld to be but one, to bask in dwell and feel the sun Where visions born do come to eyes and mem’ries torn ‘gain realize. As souls do walk the quiet of eve and lover’s talk in hurried leave from moments of a tender touch, to wanting of a treasured much Till time so tells the heart to flee from love in swell and rhapsody the love of one shall be of two in flight of dove and passion true. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely words...and I could have written these myself.. from moments of a tender touch, to wanting of a treasured much *s M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy always this flows over my soul like honeyed wine. Never do you fail to enchant and bewitch me with your wondrous words. Do I love this you knew I would? I even forgive you for responding to the terrible duo. Everyone knows I will win anyway, if they get too uppity I have the ultimate sanction……… I’ll cut them off at the knees, by stopping their access. However I know I can always count on your support….. MMmmmm? You know who your fan base is darling heart don’t you Big smile As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
My favorite line and this is my first reply by the way, is "A sun in flame to quench desire, a number’s game in tune of lyre" This has a great quallity to it, have you been writing long? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry You paint such stunning images of love and romance through your talented pen. Your words always leave me sighing. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Msflame, I am flattered my poem is your first post.. Welcome to Passions.. To answer your question....I have been writing for about one year now....I dabbled in poetry briefly about...oh my, about 14 years ago... And only in this last year have I seriously devoted my time to writing. I try to write of and from the heart... I thank you for your words... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, Barry, I'm probably way off base with this, but what I see is very oriental in nature, a scene, perhaps, from Shogun...what, you weren't going there? Ah well, it's where your words took me, and glad I was for it... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-22-2002 08:55 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ....nice try....nope, not oriental, darn! Guess I will have to change it around a little and put a Samurai and Mount Fuji in the background or something to give it that oriental flavor....Sayonara, Kudasai! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Till time so tells the heart to flee from love in swell and rhapsody the love of one shall be of two in flight of dove and passion true. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wonderful write Barry, as always. ~Hugs from the northland~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, hugs and thanx from down south where the temp is a cool 60 degrees... Sorry, I had to say that... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. thank you...You don't need my words... Your own are too beautiful and gracious to ever need mine... Mushy darling girl....I think one day you are gonna run out of ink in your pen and you won't be able to write another book post to my poetry....Shoot...I am gonna miss those words....Check the ink!!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Once again the wings of your heart flutter with loves halcyon melodies, sweet friend, may you always share the language of the doves with your soulmate and glide to eternity always! (big huggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-21-2002 10:16 PM).] |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
you are quite welcome, your poetry is honest and from the heart, I believe as is much if not all on this site. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You're such a romantic, Magnus! First sailing ships now in tones of Irish! Core |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* it is wonderful to loose myself in your romantic words if even for a very little while...beautiful.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, dear lady....I have so much missed your replies...Nice to see you, if only for a moment of time... Thank You! |
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