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dgvarner
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0 posted 2002-05-21 12:50 PM



     i forgot
to hold you...
     i forgot
to wrap my arms
around your shoulders
to feel you nuzzle in
to my neck
to let your arms
melt me in their embrace...
     i forgot
until i heard the door close
until you started the car
until just before i wanted to
jump up and run to you...
     i forgot
how warm you are
     my body left wanting your
     closeness
          feeling
               second by second
how it wouldve been
right now
     had i not forgotten...
but it seems
     i forgot...

-dgvarner
5-2-02
kdr

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

© Copyright 2002 dgvarner - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2002-05-21 01:20 PM


Well....where are we going to get you some memory pills??? I think you know that every hug and every uzzle is one you miss.....just kidding....It's really funny how some things so precious can slip our mind when we are preoccupied with other things.
Nice write! I could imagine the scene!

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-05-21 02:29 PM


Me, too.  Then threw in neglect just for kicks.
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2002-05-21 08:20 PM


dg, did you forget to your oldtimers Rx?
LOL, I think can remember a forgetting scene such as this. But I can't remember for sure!

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4 posted 2002-05-21 09:36 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is soooo cute, sweet friend, I know this feeling where we are preoccupied, though I would never want to forget my love and make her happy always! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

dgvarner
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5 posted 2002-05-21 10:36 PM


ETHOME..doggone it all!  i need those memory pills!!  lol
DUNCAN..you forgot AND neglected??!!!  jeez...youre worse off than i...
MIDNITESUN..um..i thought i did..but i forget...
NOAH..i did not want to forget either!!  but i did!!     

thanks all..much enjoy your replies..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

Parker
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6 posted 2002-05-22 11:39 AM


cute write.... glad to see you didn't forget how to write. Nice to see your pen.

Parker

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-05-22 11:59 AM



Enjoyed this...lest we forget, GIVE A HUG!

kaile
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8 posted 2002-05-22 01:17 PM


gale,

i bet you are a fast sprinter though..i bet you caught up with his car and embraced him real tight...

er, don't be too hard on yourself, alright?

vandana
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9 posted 2002-05-22 07:40 PM


enjoyed
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2002-05-22 09:05 PM


Gale, I'm so glad I didn't miss this one..
I know where these feelings come from.
Excellent write and I have missed you here.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

EagleOne
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11 posted 2002-05-25 02:07 AM


Somehow I doubt you'll forget again! Enjoyed the read, take care!

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets.  ~Arthur Miller

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