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What flows through me

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Greeneyes
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0 posted 05-21-2002 11:07 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


I have come for this--
to say this:
   but words fail me
often, very often--


My thoughts --

After it snowed
and the air was crisp
you could smell
the ozone--a fresh
birthing of
crystal rain

Do not think
I can not remember
how we danced
like thieves--
how the air floated us,
without words
like--
melting rainbows

Two steps of light
restless over
frozen grass

One touch of warmth

Between us
innocent laughter
nights of  making love
real beneath
ballrooms of
stars


time passes


Tonight I have come
for this, to say this:

I have opened
   the window

I have waited years
to feel

my thoughts


I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-21-2002 07:55 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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this makes me long for a mug of hot chocolate, lmao.
very sensual writing, Lauren.
-Dave
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2 posted 05-21-2002 11:27 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lauren,
May all you utter flower. Enjoyed
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(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may windows of new dreams and hopes always open for you and let in drafts of loves whispers into your heart forever, sweet friend, I just love the way you express and describe emotions! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 05-21-2002 12:35 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

...............you keep leavin' me speechless.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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. . . me too. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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6 posted 05-21-2002 04:26 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

"...danced/like thieves--" I LOVE this line. And the rest of course... soft, sad. Real.

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7 posted 05-21-2002 04:32 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice...one of my favorites of you...James
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8 posted 05-21-2002 05:23 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Me three!!!

Wow,  are you ever putting silk on the page
with your passion filled pen...
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Excellent writing...
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Wow. This is so soft and gentle, a Lauren trademark.
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11 posted 05-22-2002 12:34 PM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

One truckload of snow on order ....
do you have a place to keep it?

I may have to deliver it in person ...
just keep your window open ...

just my thoughts  
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What flows through you is indeed time and love itself.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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13 posted 05-22-2002 03:30 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Just a delightful and marvelous write.....wonderful render of emotions.....a superb read!
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