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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-21 06:46 AM


A Place Called
Eternity

Someday my earthy body
will breathe it's very last breath
and loved one's on this earth
will carefully lay my body to rest.

Someday my earth bound soul shall be
released and it will soar heavenly
to occupy a special place that my
Heavenly Father has prepared for me.

Someday my soul will live in a special
place where it will be totally free
and I shall live forevermore
in a place called Eternity.

JamesLee
May21
2002

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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-05-21 06:52 AM


James darling this is absolutely beautiful your writing content and style consistently superb and this is as always absolutely perfect.

I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly superb, the flow is divine all the way through. This really is an excellent piece darling heart you have excelled yourself.

Wonderful writing utterly wonderful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-21 08:53 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, this is so very beautiful, sweet friend, I know when the time is right you will find your way up there and He will always comfort you with love and happiness forever in eternity! (smiles) This is so wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-21 09:00 AM


James, this is beautifully expressed.
~Hugs~

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