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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-21 04:01 AM



No Question

there
is where I
shall stay
nothing in life
can tear
me away
the bridge
is there
proceed on
never when
you look
shall it be gone
and why
do you question
the terms of we
as with souls
I have half
the other is thee
do not study
these feelings
in a book
they hang
on stars at night
just look
a past
a present
a future untold
you are safe
in the envelope
of my hearts fold


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-05-21 04:03 AM


I really like the title over this content!
These lines are special..
                "do not study
                 these feelings
                 in a book
                 they hang
                 on stars at night
                 just look
                 a past
                 a present
                 a future untold
                 you are safe
                 in the envelope
                 of my hearts fold"
I really enjoyed the write!

Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
2 posted 2002-05-21 11:10 PM


OMG, this si just awesome! Simply awesome, Girl! I love this!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-05-21 11:27 PM


Your words dance upon the page and on the tongue as ice cream...delicate and sweet ThisDiamond
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2002-05-22 06:45 AM


mm yes slick ms
you do say it
with a lady touch

enjoyed it

Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
5 posted 2002-05-22 10:21 AM


beautiful.....
I have been so busy at work that I haven't had much time to post... but your writing as always is wonderfull....
~~ Connie ~~

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