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Saunni
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0 posted 2002-05-21 02:27 AM



HE Who Has Everything

In the middle of her quiet storm dwelling within
She searches for patience that's vanished like dust in the wind
If solitude was anything at all she could count on
Her footprints still wouldn't be visible for the places she's been...

Upon one knee and sometimes both in her darkest hour
She begs to the skies in her moment of plead
Her physical gesture of how life frowns upon her
She cries out to HE who has everything...

Beneath pale moonlight you can hear her verbal agony
To the only one out there she knows can hear
HE who has it all in his blessed kingdom beyond the eyes
Why can't a little happiness run the path of those tears...

She's never ran a mile wearing a smile that's been real
It seems she spends her waking days looking for a lift
HE who has everything and owns peace by the miles
She asks him often to lend her some of his...

HE who has everything loan her something to open those eyes for
Something for always and not just that temporary sun
A little sweetness to brush even the tip of her heart
And, allow her to lust in the glory being the chosen one...

HE who has everything show her your soul's listening
How your power can lead even the weakest home
HE who has everything chase her rain to a different sky
Cause, the only power I know well is alone...

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

© Copyright 2002 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-21 03:00 AM


The sadness and pleading in this reveal a heart still bleeding and seeking comfort and recognition. And yet, you seem to have found who to talk to for help. Hugs to you, and please keep smiling that beautiful smile.
ethome
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2 posted 2002-05-21 04:08 AM


He who has everthing should be happy to be there for her....It's nice how you keep bringing this full circle and present the answers! Good writing!
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3 posted 2002-05-21 08:23 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Saunni, this is soooooo beautifully heatfelt, sweet friend, and I know deep down there is much happiness and solace in store for her and He always keeps His promises! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-21 04:11 PM


the heart knows the way to go. . . keep listening. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

msflame
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5 posted 2002-05-21 07:48 PM


I read this earlier before joining it's very nicely written, very good touch to the words.
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