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Kiss of blue flame (MidsummerRain challenge)
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Kiss of blue flame (MidsummerRain challenge) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Her kisses fell like blue flame from the sky of ceiling's bed. They were drops of comfort, warmth at a time of wilt instead. She grew the strength back to my arms. Tender travel to mouth's corners. The winter sparks of between hope. The summer sun to keep and warm us. Her kisses fell like blue flame. I touched her rain upon the pane. I touched her hair upon the same. Her fingers dropped. We released pain. She said burn ... together. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Like I said before...I always love the images you put down in print...I enjoyed the read very much! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BSQ, obviously you are always up to a challenge. I have greatly admired, of late, your new take on poetry...make sure you back up everything, for I would not want you to ever lose any Keepers... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Glad y' both enjoyed.She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Not sure of the challenge here Mkie...but I rather enjoy the thought of you as a dainty rose...  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too don't know of this challenge but I'd love to give it a try! (big hugggssssss) May her kisses always touch your heart with joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Oh, the challenge was to write a story about a kiss as creatively as possible. Glad y' enjoyed. She said burn ... together. |
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