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Passions Poetic Prince, A tribute to Balladeer, a monologue
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Passions Poetic Prince, A tribute to Balladeer, a monologue |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Passions Poetic Prince A tribute to Balladeer, a monologue There’s a fabulous place called Passions that’s noted for fine poetry And one day my browser took me to this poetic sanctuary A wonderful place is the forum where poets gather to spar They come from all over the world, from places near and quite far Here they swap tales of adventure, they tell of this and of that I’ve even heard of one poet who confessed to kicking a cat Long John is the name of this monster, but before you get quite riled I believe he was referring to when he was a reckless heedless child Every place has its star attractions, there’s always a cream of the crop And Passions is no exception there’s an elite with a name at the top For all of you new members who have never met him before Let me introduce you to ‘Deer, he’s the one who we all adore His name is heard in high places, he’s a prince of poetic renown And there’s no other man quite like him for getting rid of a frown I’ve seen him dispense great wisdom, he can always summon a smile And as for his poetic journeys I’d walk with him mile after mile I’ve read his heart’s compassion, I’ve listened to his sparkling wit I’ve even seen him fight off three and he didn’t even puff a bit There are other poets of note, all the best writers gather here But none of them can take the crown from that perfect prince Balladeer I don’t suppose they mind, he doesn’t puff out his chest with glee Which isn’t always the case when you are considered a celebrity No really he’s quite modest and he can be seen most every day In that premier place called Passion’s putting on a poets display Emma A short note, I’ve written this monologue, I chose a monologue because it has always been one of my favourite things to read. Aunt of heart Kari will you now admit that I can’t write and stop requesting me to do so. Krissy complains if I’m on the computer too much and mum is already threatening me with consequences too dire to mention. ‘Deer I hope you didn’t mind me writing this too much, please forgive the really bad poetry and let’s be friends. I promise I won’t write any more, I wouldn’t have written anything if Aunt of Heart Kari hadn’t asked me to. Eternity, stands laughing at old time for ages? In the grand ancestral line Of things eternal, mounting to divine [This message has been edited by andEmmamakes3 (05-20-2002 12:21 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, this aunt shan't insist that you now take a nap for a poem of great renown has been placed within our laps we shall hug you with tender care for all you've said and done and 'Deer, well he will blush at this song you've sung! ~*~ Nope! You have only hooked yourself into writing more...  and  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bye the by...check your E-mail for a Very Special Message! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
What a sweet tribute to our Balladeer but.... MODEST??? Oh my gosh you say modest  I'm sure that our Balladeer sweetie, Although he is quite a cutie patoetie, Would like to be referred to as a modest man Who likes a bit of poetry and a lot of Spam (or was it the other way around?) But he's just a wolf in sheepish clothes Ask Toereg and Long John, he bit them both "I'm The Mighty Balladeer" he shouts a lot He's a doll, he's sweet but MODEST?, he is not Ha ha, I just love to ruffle you up a bit my Deer Thank Emma for writing this superb verse for you here Welcome Emma, we're going to have a lot of fun Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Emma~ A delight to see you posting ... nah, it shan't be your first and last bundled up in one swath of ink ! You delightful girl you ... welcome, welcome, welcome !!  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Emma: This is absolutely delightful! Cleverly written and you should be proud.....good tribute! Ha ha, some good funny parts too! I love it! ethome |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s fine job you did here, Emma. hugsss M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 EMMA, THIS IS WONDERFUL!! You write like a dream! I will be looking forward to more of your work! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Your Aunt of heart Kari, is very very wise!~  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Okay, how much did 'Deer pay you? No reason -- just wondering what th' going rate is. Heh heh. Enjoyed this, Emma. She said burn ... together. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Emma ... this is wonderful! Welcome to Passions!  Well, now, I'll have to say a great big thank you to Sunshine for encouraging you to post this great tribute to our Balladeer! He's a marvelous man, and you've captured so many aspects of both Passions, and our sweet poet's charm. Well done indeed ... it's great to see you join the Passion's family.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
welcome  nice job on your first post. hope to see many more from you. welcome peace and love Jesse    Another town another hotel room |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Emma, this was a delight to read...your writing is very very good...please don't think differently and you've described our Bal to a T...wonderful write. it is so good to finally see some poetry from you and thank you for your wonderful compliments on mine...i take them all to heart. take care. love you. amy "you can't stop |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions.... you will love it here.... great first write.... Greeneyes~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Emma, what can I say? To be the object of your first poetic endeavor is quite the honor! You may not think it very good but, believe me, I've seen first poems before and yours excels over them by far. You rhyme well and there is more than a small trace of very good meter there. In your next ones (and there WILL be next ones!!) I have little doubt you will continue to grow and blossom into a very good poet. I look forward to seeing them! How you can know so much about me is uncanny...right down to the modesty part!  Yes, Passions is a wonderful place. The fact alone that it takes people who have never written before and instills in them the desire to write.....well, there is no finer compliment. I have no doubt you will be a very welcome addition to the group (if momma lets you get on the 'puter once in a while) Thank you, Emma, and I salute your poetic creation!!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Emma...what a wonderful first post! I really enjoyed this look at Balladeer through your eyes...pretty accurate too! Welcome to Passions! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so very happy you are writing, sweet friend, just like your mom and your sister you have a remarkable talent! YAY!!! I just know Balladeer is going to love this forever! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Emma, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Emma, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Emma, Go to the head of he class. A wonderful piece of writing. And as you see Dear loved it. Welcome dear. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Emma, do NOT throw that pillow at me! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Emma, your Mum threatened to stop saying nice things about my poetry IF you continued to write.... Well, I guess I am just going to have to put up with not getting those wonderful words of hers....and start reading the wonderful words of your poetry..... Sorry Mushy, but a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do..... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to passions Emma. You're going to love it here. This is a wonderful first post. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Emma, you are destined for stardom. The Deer may have to make room on that throne. For now, we will let him sit there and enjoy the view. Welcome to the land of magic! And thank you for bringing your own personal magic to this board. This is a well done piece.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm here again, Just to irritate your mother...give her a crumb of time on the computer....and to give her some target other that you and Krissy to aim for... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Emma, I love your work,its so fresh. Shhhh don't let your mother hear this, I think you have inherited her talent for rhyme and metre. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Emma, This is neat. I think you've done very well. Don't let your sister and your mom keep you down. Elbow your way to the computer every now and then, and post one! Nan |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Every place has its star attractions, there’s always a cream of the crop And Passions is no exception there’s an elite with a name at the top Rarely have truer words been written, Emma! I don't know why you think you are not a good poet! You come from a talented family and it definitely shows. One suggestion I might give you though, and this is probably only because I am an old lady whose eyesight is failing her.... Pleeeze dearest one, would you post your poems in a darker color, so us old folks can see them without squinting! Welcome to our Passions family, Emma...and don't let anyone talk you away from us.... I guess, your Mum needs to buy a second computer now! (oh she'll kill me for even suggesting that)  ~lots of welcoming hugsLyra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
monologue's are one of my fav's, Emma. Welcome aboard, and leave all fear behind: you have the gift within each line is golden you have written the smile you gave to ALL of us, immense. Thank you Emma With Four Names. May your pen never go dry theShadowRider *s* |
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