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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2002-05-20 12:29 PM



Angels walk the earth you know
And loved ones lost, aren’t gone
Seems they might have passed away
But no, they’ve just passed on

A child ought hear from father’s lips
That God should fill their heart
And from your poems Larry C.
I know you’ve done your part

I lost my mom, that doesn’t help,
To know I feel your pain
But gramma lost her daughter too
And together they are again

So as I wait to meet my mom
You miss your departed daughter
But life, you know, never ceases
From the gift you never bought her


…….She’s in Heaven


(I meant this with the best intentions and from the heart....the gift you didn't buy her is simply the gift that Jesus paid for us all)

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (05-20-2002 12:30 AM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-05-20 12:53 PM


That was eloquent, Walt...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-05-20 12:53 PM


very thoughtful of you, at this time of sorrow...for a great guy


Larry C
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3 posted 2002-05-20 01:01 AM


Walt,
How incredibly tender are your thoughts with no misunderstanding. Bless you for such incredible understanding and friendship. Thank you so very much.

Tracey
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4 posted 2002-05-20 01:08 AM


This is lovely Walt...very touching.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-05-20 03:31 AM


Compassionate words Walt...James
passing shadows
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6 posted 2002-05-20 06:36 AM


I never thought ole walt could make me cry but I'm
andEmmamakes3
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Kent
7 posted 2002-05-20 07:09 AM


Walt hi there Mushy’s youngest and prettiest daughter here I am moved beyond tears by the writing in your amazing poem. This is such a wonderful example of your love for poor Larry

lots of love
Emma

Eternity, stands laughing at old time
for ages? In the grand ancestral line
Of things eternal, mounting to divine

Kethry
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8 posted 2002-05-20 08:57 AM


Walt,
what a caring heart you have.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-05-20 09:02 AM


Walt,
Wonderful write and as you can see Larry loved it.

Enchantress
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10 posted 2002-05-20 09:06 AM


Very well said Walt.
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11 posted 2002-05-20 10:09 AM



The oceans swell with the outpouring...Walt, you have given of yourself as only you can do...thank you...

Honeybee
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12 posted 2002-05-20 11:39 AM



Walt, this is beautiful, so classy and compassionate of you to write for him.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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