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DestinysCharm
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0 posted 2002-05-20 12:09 PM


Your Angel

A solemn feeling is resting on my heart tonight.
Some hugs needed by a friend are to be in flight.
On angels wings they’ll soar, a hope-filled reflector.
She’ll be watching over you with an emotion detector,
Than, zap! Just like that, a friendly hug will be injected.
One that can keep the rainfall of tears from being infected.

Close your eyes for a minute, can you see your angel?
She can be as close or far, as the sound of a chiming bell.
Sometimes, she seems invisible, yet her whisper is deeply felt,
Working to ease all the pain and sorrows, that you have been dealt.
Every tracing second of a minute through the many hours of everyday,
May your angel be there beside you, guiding, and protecting all the way.


© Copyright 2002 DestinysCharm - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-05-20 12:58 PM


That was such a nice gesture. And an enjoyable poem.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-05-20 10:20 AM



I like the presentation,
like a stairstep to heaven...

Thank you...

DawnG
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3 posted 2002-05-20 12:50 PM


DestinysCharm,

This poem is abolutely beautiful. Thank you for writing it.

                       Dawn

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-05-20 01:16 PM


DestinysCharm~
I am sure this fell in many a heart~
Thank you for sharing such gentle beauty~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

ethome
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5 posted 2002-05-20 02:41 PM


Wonderful rise to peak in this gentle beauty of a poem!
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