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Helea
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since 1999-08-30
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Canada

0 posted 2002-05-19 11:37 PM



I knew you were waiting, Waiting to see me, to judge me. Maybe even waiting to love me.
I rushed up to find you pacing nervously back and forth I glanced at you and without hesitating, I greeted you with a smile. You turned to face me and my world shook. Your eyes saw through my soul, through my thoughts and my most inner feelings.

My knees felt weak but your gaze held me and comforted me.
Your smile was a masterpiece that not even angels could have carved. It send a chill to my heart, awakening these new feelings, feelings I could not desire more.

I felt lost in your eyes...
I knew then nothing could steal this moment from me...
I could forget your name but your soul would always be known to me. I could forget the world but your eyes would always be there. I will always remember that moment, The moment when I met you, When your world was shown to me.

For angels cry in warning! Such warning I could not hear, For God Himself spoke through your eyes. He spoke words of truth, of love and sincerity. Oh! You are special in so many ways.
So special it's driving you insane for you do not know this!
But it's this innocence that makes you so beautiful
So delicate yet so strong!


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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-05-20 01:16 AM


Wow ... and this is only 13 posts in? I'm amazed.

This rocked.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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