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kaile
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0 posted 2002-05-19 11:00 PM


Words must seem so hollow,
when the vitality is snatched
away from someone in her prime,
someone a part of you

My hand is small
It offers little comfort,
I'm afraid
But I'll place it in yours,
squeeze yours really, really tight
and wait quietly for your cue

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Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-05-19 11:04 PM


faterider...that is a sweet, sweet poem...
I'm sure that Larry will appreciate it and appreciate your thoughts of him tonight.
~tears and hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-05-19 11:06 PM


I have no words, I can only mutter

softly.....


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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3 posted 2002-05-19 11:07 PM


Sometimes just that small act helps a lot....
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4 posted 2002-05-19 11:07 PM


Hello faterider

So very heartfelt were your words and I'm sure Larry will find much comfort from this.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2002-05-19 11:09 PM


....Just when I thought I had no tears left...



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6 posted 2002-05-19 11:49 PM


faterider,
That sounds so very comforting about now. What a generous appropriate gesture. Bless you.

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7 posted 2002-05-20 12:20 PM


Small and special. I loved how you said that...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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Gaia
8 posted 2002-05-20 01:55 AM


Small hand, giant heart. You are wonderful friend.
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