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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-05-19 10:09 PM



Seraphic Soaring

~*Marge Tindal*~

She was born with tiny wing-sprouts
adorning her earthly spirit
Spreading her smiles through twenty-eight years
writing her love on her Daddy's heart

God was searching for angels last evening
when she heard Him call her name
She said, "Dad, I'm not sure I want to go, but
He must need me more than you do right now."

Seraphic feathering unfurled ...
Ginger Michelle gently soared home
Blowing a kiss of 'always remember' to Dad~


~Larry, our hearts are with you in your loss~
May 19, 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2002-05-19 10:15 PM



Again, no more words needed here

Big HUG dear Marge

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Larry C
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3 posted 2002-05-19 10:45 PM


Oh Marge you dear sweet friend,
Thank you ever so much for such tender kind words.

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4 posted 2002-05-19 10:56 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful.
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5 posted 2002-05-19 11:11 PM


A lovely comforting poem, Marge...
~tears and hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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~Ginger Michelle, we will remember you~

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7 posted 2002-05-19 11:28 PM


Marge, you are truly a giving person.

Cor

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8 posted 2002-05-20 08:55 AM



Marge, a truly generous gift of heart...

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9 posted 2002-05-20 09:14 AM


Margie girl that you have taken the time to create such a superbly crafted poem to offer in some way comfort to Larry shows without doubt how compassionate and loving you are. Beautiful writing and amazing sentiments, but over all the love you feel for Larry C must give his soul some measure of comfort in a time of inconsolable grief

it’s Mushy’s youngest daughter here I’ve always admired your writing, it has such a special quality, being composed of your heart’s purest ink of poetic art. I’ve long wanted to join in the fun of PiP’s but mum wishing to keep her haven all to herself. And who can blame her really always refused to allow me to do so. after she let Krissy join though it she had to cede her position becoming untenable in the light of Krissy being a member

lots of love
Emma

Eternity, stands laughing at old time
for ages? In the grand ancestral line
Of things eternal, mounting to divine

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-05-20 09:19 AM


Marge,
You have a large heart.

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11 posted 2002-05-20 10:42 AM


I've been fighting tears all morning... I lost the battle reading this tender beauty written with compassion's ink.
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12 posted 2002-05-20 11:09 AM


a comforting poem, Marge

Martin


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-20-2002 11:10 AM).]

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13 posted 2002-05-20 11:14 AM


beautiful write Marge!!!

[This message has been edited by BrandeeM (05-20-2002 11:16 AM).]

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14 posted 2002-05-20 11:17 AM


Marge??...Is it really you??!!
missed you sweetie!!!

This was a beautiful tribute...could not imagine the pain...my heart is with you and them...

Love ya
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2002-05-20 12:50 PM


Larry ... friends are gathered~
*Hugs*
~*Marge and the Passions' Crew*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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16 posted 2002-05-20 01:25 PM


That was beautiful, deer poet.

Squirrel

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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17 posted 2002-05-20 02:30 PM


Wonderfully worded in kindness Marge! You have such a tender and insightful heart!
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18 posted 2002-05-20 02:59 PM




softly

....

Marge~
Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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