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Martie
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0 posted 2002-05-19 08:44 PM



The Kind you Can’t Blow Out

You know how I love a slivered moon
nestled in the horizon
like the curved side of forever?

It says look beyond what you see,
see the circle still and even better
shadowed in grace.

Continuance bubbles and does not break,
but changes ache to smile and breath to sigh.
We can even measure it with the beat of the drum
that foretells dance from shore to desert sand
and fills the minute with meter,
for this is evidence of the sprit of forever.

The slivered moon makes me brand new,
yet, ancient in some layered time
that has whispered in dreams
of many moons,
a time that is fluid
and at the same time light as air,
where color has no name
and a song sings itself.

Is this the place where
grace is born?

I have felt it simmer in my heart
and I hear its laced call
fill my listening
as a child whispers her laughter
down the stairs of knowing.

And so I just know
that love never dies,
that souls hold all the candles
and they are the kind
you can’t blow out.



© Copyright 2002 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-19 08:52 PM



Thank you Martie...

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2 posted 2002-05-19 08:54 PM


OhMartie~

'I have felt it simmer in my heart
and I hear its laced call
fill my listening
as a child whispers her laughter
down the stairs of knowing.

And so I just know
that love never dies,
that souls hold all the candles
and they are the kind
you can’t blow out.'


You found some beautiful comfort for Larry~
Thank you dear lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2002-05-19 08:55 PM


This site has more heart and passion than I've ever seen anywhere else.
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4 posted 2002-05-19 08:57 PM


Martie, thank you for posting this for Larry.
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5 posted 2002-05-19 09:19 PM


Martie dear friend,

And so I just know
that love never dies,
that souls hold all the candles
and they are the kind
you can’t blow out.

Such tenderness means so much...

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6 posted 2002-05-19 09:26 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Forgive me if I can't say much about this right now, I feel too sad to speak but I know with all my heart Larry will always cherish this, just as you are a true angel! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) My thoughts and prayers join yours, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tracey
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7 posted 2002-05-19 09:35 PM


Beautiful Martie. So glad you reposted this for Larry.
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8 posted 2002-05-19 10:00 PM


as a child whispers her laughter
down the stairs of knowing.

And so I just know
that love never dies,
that souls hold all the candles
and they are the kind
you can’t blow out.

Beautiful.....beautiful, Martie
and full of hope and faith.

~tearful hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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9 posted 2002-05-19 10:01 PM


....

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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10 posted 2002-05-19 11:20 PM


Softly.....

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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11 posted 2002-05-19 11:21 PM


Martie, your words are always the right thing to say....
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12 posted 2002-05-20 12:07 PM



Oh Martie, this is just so tender, so moving   Thank you for sharing this with our Larry...It's a keeper~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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13 posted 2002-05-20 12:13 PM


but changes ache to smile and breath to sigh.  What a beautifulwrite indeed! ~Rayne

The strands in your eyes
That color them wonderful
Stop me & steal my breath...

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14 posted 2002-05-20 07:34 AM


Martie hi there Mushy’s youngest and prettiest daughter here I am moved beyond tears by the writing in your amazing poem. This is such a wonderful example of your love for poor Larry

lots of love
Emma

Eternity, stands laughing at old time
for ages? In the grand ancestral line
Of things eternal, mounting to divine

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15 posted 2002-05-20 10:31 AM


And so I just know
that love never dies,
that souls hold all the candles
and they are the kind
you can’t blow out.

A tender and touching promise... and given now from one heart to another. Beautiful!


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16 posted 2004-05-18 11:36 PM


Thinking today of Larry!  
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