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ambermize
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California

0 posted 2002-05-20 04:28 PM



It's funny how the rain.....
can pull at your heartstrings,
Just the way he used to,
And still does..from time to time..

It's amazing how the nightime.....
can hold you just as harshly,
As his hands used to feel,
After loving someone else.

It's indignified to think......
That all to often you wonder,
What might have been,
depite everything that was...

   Everything that ate at you.....
     And stole your beauty everytime.......
         You lost yourself in those eyes agian..

It's maliciuos to think...
How I wanted to hurt you so,
Just to prove that you could feel,
Depite how numb you displayed yourself to be.

It's distracting to glance...
back at my youth,
Pondering upon...
The guilt I should feel.

It's unjustly so......
That tommorow will come,
Regardless of the rain,
Or the way I force myself to think.

It's wonderful how the cold........
Wraps itself around me,
Taking me in so lovingly,
The way you never did..
  
Storms may come...and go about there way...
  But every night caresses the scares that you gave,
    And I wake up a better person......
       than I ever let you make me.

© Copyright 2002 amber mize - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-05-20 04:34 PM


Lots of twists and turns of emotion well written into this piece. Some wonderful descriptive linnes describing the hurt and also the reslove from reflecting....I really enjoyed this piece!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-20 04:43 PM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2002-05-20 04:52 PM


"Storms may come...and go about there way...
  But every night caresses the scares that you gave,
    And I wake up a better person......
       than I ever let you make me."




(sigh) Oh Amber, this is soooooo sadly beautiful, sweet friend, yes, and may time ease all your woes and bring great peace and love to your heart and fill in the scars with new hope and happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amber, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
4 posted 2002-05-20 08:10 PM


well doesn't this just sum up the whole relationship???

G's Ambs...I'm starting to see the YOU again...

loved this and love you
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



ambermize
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
California
5 posted 2002-05-20 11:15 PM


Yes....kinda sums up everything. Thanks so much for reading.... Couldnt rhyme this one...kinda just spilled out....one of those I guess....
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