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One Moment
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One Moment |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
 A moment forgotten...set aside; yet never really gone from the heart. One look, one kiss forever sealed, forever felt. Deep inside a flame blazing... waiting to burst forth, consume the hearts of two. A treasured hand held into Eternity, a guiding hand leading through Love's maze. Coming out into the moment when love began, love grew, love became only you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
love the last line IvyRose, just beautiful Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy, this could be on a card....given to someone special.....Truly a gem of a poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose, A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I really enjoyed this one..you captured the feeling well. *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I still yearn so much for my first kiss and I'm hoping this summer I can share it with my Joanna if we get to meet! (kiss on cheek) May this afterglow of that simple kiss always bring a smile to your heart, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-19-2002 02:24 PM).] |
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J New Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 9UK |
hey there.. wow, what an amazing poem, this is really good! youv'e captured this love in a moment so well. the start and finnish were very good, original and beautiful... i think they make the poem what it is..... well done. J |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice poem of being consumed by love. I like the blazing fire y' wrote about. She said burn ... together. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ 'A moment forgotten...set aside; yet never really gone from the heart. One look, one kiss forever sealed, forever felt. ---------------- Coming out into the moment when love began, love grew, love became only you.' Sometimes ... I feel you peek right into my heart~ This soooooooooo tenderly resides in a special heart-chamber of me~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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