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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-05-20 03:12 PM




~Traces of You~

traces of you can be seen in me long after you're gone
miles may seperate us...but my heart still sings our love's song
your touch can still be felt softly upon my skin
the love we share forever burning within

traces of you can be heard even though you're not here
still I feel you holding me as you wipe away my tear
your eyes reflect through mine, though we are apart
it doesn't matter...for we're always together in heart

one day we'll be as one...and all of our dreams will come true
this will be our past...the future will chase away this blue
your soul is entwined with mine...our love is pure destiny
when we kiss and our hearts touch...it is more than just basic chemistry

some things were meant to be
you freed the chains that were locked deep inside of me
my words of love for you will never run out of rhyme...and my love will never go
you fill my life with such love and happiness...and this we both know

you give your love so easily, free and with such gentleness
your soul paints mine in colors bright with the softest caress
traces of you can be found deep inside of me
because...you and i were simply meant to be

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-20 03:59 PM




(smiles) I love this, sweet friend, may love always trace your heart and make a tapestry of happy memories to quilt your life forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2002-05-20 04:06 PM


noah, thank you
you always have such a elegant way
of writing...your words made me smile.
love ya.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2002-05-20 05:12 PM


Aimster...such a great heartfelt write of loyalty and dedication to the depth of love. A very enjoyable read!!
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
4 posted 2002-05-21 11:13 PM


Amy, and as long as you have a mental image you will also have that trace of that special person! Just another of your touching work here. It always makes me smile. You have a good heart,don't ever change.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Duncan
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5 posted 2002-05-22 12:19 PM


one day we'll be as one...and all of our dreams will come true
this will be our past...the future will chase away this blue

You write from the heart, Amy...sincerely and without hesitation.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2002-05-22 08:47 AM


eric,

thank you for your wonderful reply...
so good to see your name around here.
you made me smile. thank you. take
care.
amy

saunni,
thank you for your beautiful words.
they are very touching. so nice to
see you.

duncan,

thank you for taking the time
and gracing myself with your
precious replies and words. you
have a true heart of gold. take
care

love ya all.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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