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tornapart New Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 6 |
Wheww its been so long since i have posted  Kinda rusty thoI wonder, if I lie inside you spread my hands and feet Taking over your very being, ever so slowly So that it’s me and not you any more, covering every inch My soul and your body Would I be able to see the world like u see it? When I have been longing for it. And if I touch the things around u, your hands, my wishes Will I be able to feel like u do? Touch the way u do Through your eyes will the colors of the world become brighter? Will darkness die down if I share your light with u? Will I be able to hear the things u do? That soft melodious music that u talk about and I fail to hear When all i hear is deafening silence and threats of death And I wonder if lie inside you, will u notice me (for once) Will I know what’s inside your mind? Would I be able to talk the way u do To weave around this magic u so often do Will I be able to control u? To make you know me Making u bend at my every whim, every need If I lie inside and so close to your heart Will the sweet blood flow inside my veins too Will I become as wonderful and as cruel? Will your beauty reflect in me? Will u be able to understand my truths? If I lie inside u Will u finally say those things not said? The words that I so want to hear Will I be able to make u speak? Your thoughts and mine together, learning each other Will heaven be found and will hell ever burn away in its own fire So close to you as close as I can get Will u teach me your games? The secrets that u have Will I be able to know and understand? And still fight for u, making you fight for me I wonder…. If I lie inside u. But the question is… will you EVER take me in? |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
i should not have the privilage of being the first post for this piece |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
You just blew me away, what a great write! Bottom line is, even if you seem 'em coming, you're not ready for the big moments. No one asks for their life to change, not really. But it does. So w |
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tornapart New Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 6 |
Heya yeh well i read yer stuff and to tell u the truth i stand nowhere! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I can feel such a strong yearning in these words, sweet friend, I do hope that your invitation is accepted and that together you will always find true solace and escape into each others thoughts with bliss! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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tornapart New Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 6 |
Thanks a lot! That meant a lot!Hug* |
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