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Gray Valentine
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Gray Valentine |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Gray Valentine i miss you as i miss the sun without you my soul undone you are the sea brushing sand the colors gone my world is bland |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
short and aweet i know how you feel valentines are always gray |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ This little thing was sad enough without sitting on the back pages almost forgotten~ *Hugs* from me to that little 'gray valentine'~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now the sun has shone in your skies with a warm welcoming smile of love! (sigh) This is sadly touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
can relate. succinct.  |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Such a bittersweet piece! Sad, yet lovely. Very full of feeling! Well done! Love, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
the colors gone my world is bland Amazing what a difference one person can make, huh? but I'm lonely now, and I don't know how |
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