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Paper Doll |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Paper Doll a paper doll not in my plan I break the mold walk off that stand there are no tabs to truly fit the fire of me when I am lit who I am is not flat no empty shell imagine that when picking partners for your solitary game pass me by all the same |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Gosh, Helen. I remember playing with those paper dolls when I was little. What an analogy! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
1slick_lady, I loved the layers in this three dimensional write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What cool write! You give this metaphor new life with your charisma and depth. Please publish your poetry!  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (05-19-2002 11:46 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
God you rock!  She said burn ... together. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . this speaks volumes indeed. . . excellent helen. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Amazing crafted ... love it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, that settles that for sure....well delivered! Cleverly written! |
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