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Hallucination
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0 posted 2002-05-18 04:40 PM


"Your Picture"
© 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1:
I got your picture hanging on my wall
I couldn't help but take a look
'Cause I took that picture in your birthday
Reminds me when times were good
All those words lost in empty days
All those sweet, sweet dreams now erased
Always...

Chorus:
Your picture (pause)
Speaks a thousand words -
That I was wrong in believin'
Those rumours were true
That I left you over something
(pause) You didn't do
Your picture (pause)
Speaks a thousand words

Verse 1:
I sit all alone wrapped up in sadness
And I feel my eyes drip in pain
looking on the memories past
There's no shelter from the rain
Never knew I'd be without you
Never knew I could feel so blue
Inside...

Re-Chorus:

Bridge:
I'm pushing my love to the fullest
'Cause I just gotta have you back
I have carry too much shame to call
It couldn't be as simple as that
Times is starting to run out for good
Wish I hadn't missunderstood

Verse 3:
I guess I never really trusted you
And that is why we are apart
I didn't believe you 'cause I kept my
Darkest secrets from your heart
But it never occured to me
That I would be to blind to see
Reason...

Re-Chorus:

Tag:
I got your picture hanging on my wall...

[This message has been edited by Hallucination (05-18-2002 11:12 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-05-18 10:53 PM


It hurts when all that's left is a picture.
A well done song of emotions, Brian.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-19-2002 03:01 AM).]

Hallucination
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2 posted 2002-05-18 11:13 PM


Hi Midnitesun,
Thanks alot for the read, I'm glad you like it. I really think it got some (potentiel?)!!!....

Best Wishes,

Brian.

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