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Love Me Again...
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Love Me Again... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Come, won’t you love me, through this long night’s reign Move me in slow motion, to falling rain Whisper caresses, that leave my heart bare Please touch me, yes touch me again, right there Come, dance your eyes across the soul of me Crashing in the waves of our ecstasy In fluid motion swirl, our hearts as one Hold me steadfast, when I become undone Come, rock me in this night’s magic unend Feel time pause in thundering, as we blend Emotions spill, in pools of candlelight As we splash within our love’s delight Come, won’t you love me, as this night gift’s rain As each drop falls, love me, love me again…. ~SEA~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSEA~ Lordy .... I hope you get a downpour !  'Move me in slow motion, to falling rain' BEAUTIFUL~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
as with each rain drop we reach our destination love our sweet union Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love this gorgeous sonnet, sweet friend, may you always be shielded by the umbrella of loves trust with your lve and be singing in the rain together happily forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
It's so nice to see a post by you this morning, Susan. This place hasn't been the same without you. This is such a sensual poem of love, something which you are so good at writing about. I love you, my friend. (((hugs))) me |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Nope, no way I will ever get this good..hmmm, in fact, even close...Lovely, SEA, simply lovely...very gentle smile |
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talon8 New Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 6 |
All I can say is that "I loved it"! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, so good to see your work up here again. Love this...soft and sensual. Wonderful write. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, A gifted and lovely write. Enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
.................................*gasp*!!! Glad t' have y' back, Susan...  She said burn ... together. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Come, dance your eyes across the soul of me Crashing in the waves of our ecstasy In fluid motion swirl, our hearts as one Hold me steadfast, when I become undone a gorgeous write, Sue...and its so good to see you back here again...  ~welcome back hugsLyra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
She's back...and she brought rain! Love it, Susan. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Stunning..perhaps one of your best I've had the priveledge to read |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...a pleasure to read...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan~ beautiful write my sweet friend...i have missed you lots...i've been away for a few days...so glad to come back and see this stunning write...even though you are writing about a love lost...you still do it with such grace and beauty! take care of yourself...so good to see you. amy "you can't stop |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Susan, this is sweet, feels so warm and gentle. Sandra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sea! Don't be teasing! Of course I will! Oh, there's someone else.....aw shucks! Well, bless my soul this is a sensual and provocative write but yet so romantic too....great stuff! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is a great write Sea, I've missed you. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I have heard, not from personal experience, that the rain is a good....you know.... Yes, that! Excellente! |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Yes, again, and again. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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