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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she is approaching now lady day of rain by spin of chance I see her myst I smell her damp perfume I know her signs when she walks close before she enters the dark trees speak of her with rustle leaves from her wind breath I listen with dry hungry ©Dark |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love the last line. I listen with dry hungry, what a fantastic image it paints. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the myst and the reign and all that comes with it.. good morning smiles D, M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kethry, thank you sweet lady for the touch...glad the poem and that image work for your day. nt, morning ms, thank you for the smile and the soft touch fingers |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Myst sprinkled here at 3:33 opening minds sating dry leaves |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
morning ms sunshine.. is supposed to rain here too....soon..don't you just love that time of day? thank you ms |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this sweet friend, I know this kind of perfume ever so much, for whenever it does rain here, sometimes I can smell lilac and jasmine in the air and I always daydream of my love just smelling the air! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah, thank you sir for the comments. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark, I too love the scent and feelings just before the rain arrives. But you said it wonderfully. ~Morning Smiles & Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you know I'm lovin this one very nice... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I find that last line quite catchy too! *wink* well done! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good MOrning, DS I can feel her coming too. What a capture of her preview. Love the way you write! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
it's just the rain...must be an omni thought..I enjoy the way this drips so lovely of a woman's natural essence and you. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchanting 1..thanks lady fair for your soft touches SEA, wear it in your mind little one, enjoy the warm, thank you Tiersdin humble thanks for the review ms martie, thank you neighbor lady...so pleased to have your touch Regina, you grace me with your damp sounds here....thank you |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy what a delight it is to read your writing. I’m always, eternally stunned by the way you shape and form a poem. This is outstandingly good. Wonderful writing, excellent utterly utterly perfect. I absolutely love it. The depth of the moment is encapsulated in this brilliant jewel of writing. In other words I love it utterly    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (05-17-2002 01:29 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mushy, thank you dear heart you bless me with your touches |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
needed the echo of your words this afternoon DS...thank you... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
devina wear them with comfort ms, my words and their echo..thank you |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
from clouds straining with moisture droplets fall, wind dancing to greet parched earth with splashes of life's nectar... he lifts his face and remembers the valley green and blossom scents in her hair Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and she was rain with sea side breath she knew his hard mountain fingers as they brushed her smile edges thanks for the poetic reply Indi, you are smooooooth |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I smell her damp perfume I know her signs when she walks close before she enters Words that touch the deepest of senses. |
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