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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Foreverly Feelings ~*Marge Tindal*~  I so often think about the foreverly feelings that you ignite The urges that set my soul on fire, the passion that makes it right You have the key to my heart, tucked inside your kiss You've only to use the key bringing my heart foreverly bliss. You ignite in me a passion as we set the fire to burn. Passion, wantonly displayed, passing the point of no return. I never want to go back to the time before your loving embrace. No other has ever held me suspended, within this foreverly place. Bill, foreverly is you~ May 16, 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill is one very very lucky man to have a woman like you in his life... Another beaut. Thanx Marge...very nicely done.... He can't help but love this... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
  This one glows with LOVE. Thanks for sharing, Marge. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Marge..so good to see you and your foreverly feelings! Hugs to you, Bill too! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, this is just beautiful. The love is very clear to see in this poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Marge, Love looks so good on ya! This is wonderful! ~Hugs to you both~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul you know I love this utterly darling heart don’t you? Sometimes the images you paint with your amazing words slip into the place within where shadows dream of foreverly. Sometimes the thought you stir lifts me into the imaginable place between dream and tomorrow’s song. I’m sure it happens with you more than any other writer. This is stunning writing pure wonder thank you for this memory’s gift I love it utterly utterly love it This is as usual stunning writing, you suit the bridal gown of love divinely darling heart sister, and this shows you gowned and ready for your heart’s bond. Truly exceptional writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Bill is a lucky guy. Well done. |
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Rotts New Member
since 2002-05-16
Posts 8Pittburgh, Pa |
Rotts, you were very gracious in your reply and I'm sure you meant well. Being new here at Passions, there may be some things you are not yet familiar with. Many poets like to have their work critiqued while others don't. When in doubt, check the profile of the poet and see how the box "Encourage critiques?" is marked. You can find the profile at the top of the poem directly to the left of the envelope signifying e-mail...the box with the little hand on the top. Enjoy your stay...  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (05-17-2002 07:07 AM).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I'm getting the feelin' that you ain't showing up this Sadie Hawkin's Day!  |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: What loving feelings are displayed in this poem and you and Bill are blessed to have this between you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
And in the end, the  you take is equal to the you make.Or somethin' close... She said burn ... together. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Absolutely Loverly! |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Dear Marge What a lovely poem We are so lucky for all that love When I think about, always my heart go dum dom dam. Wonderful feeling. Much knuffels Muys |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What beautiful feelings you've shared in this one, Marge. *S* It's so full of love... and I'm so full of gladness for you. *S* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart this deserves a sisterly bump so Bumpity bump  I wub you too Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This poem absolutely GLOWS with love, Marge.....Bill is lucky to have you. ~foreverly hugsLyra |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
There is a magic in this foreverly feeling. Very splendid write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Ohhhh, thank you ... we both feel so fortunate to have found one another~ MidniteSun~ Thanks hon ... we are just soooooo happy twogether~ MartieSis~ Ahhhhh, he's everything I didn't know I was looking for~ SmartChick~ Thanks sweetie ... he's all I ever could have dreamed come true~ Enchantress~ Thanks gal ... it sure feels good~ SweetMarshaLove~ If ever I've been blessed ... it's with the love of this wonderful man~ Thank you honey for EVERYTHING~ Seymour~ AND I'm so lucky to have your sweet friendship~ Rotts~ Welcome to Passions~ Thank you for reading my poetry ... That Balladeer gives REAL GOOD advice~  SweetBalladeer~ You DO KNOW this little Cherokee ! ! Thanks for snuffing out the smoke signals before they even got air-borne~  You are some kinda fella ... real MOD~ BettyLou~ Yes, my friend ... very blessed indeed~ Thank you so much~ BSquirrel~ Yeah ... 'real close' BluesSerenade~ Thank you so much dear ... good to see your sweet reply~ Muys~ I just LOVE your knuffels !!! Right back to you dearest lady~ SuthernGal~ You 'know' how much your sweet replies mean to the heart of this friend~ Thank you soooooo much~ MarshaLookAlike~ Tee-Hee .... I LOVE your *bump* ... kind of reminds me of one of those 'other' bumpers ! *grinning* here*~ Lyra~ Thank you dear lady ... I am just sooooo happy that it fills my inkwell to overflowing~ Gemini~ Thank you so very much ... really nice to see you~ *HUGS* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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