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elfin_tigress
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0 posted 2002-05-16 12:47 PM


I'm trapped within a Maze of Art
My motivations threads apart
To find the way to send my heart
And where I should begin

My poverty soon dusts my plate
My choice is not 'tween Sin and Great
'Tween starving Goods there lies my fate
Their diff'rence aura thin

Throughout this fight my whole soul cries
With death of one the other dies
For though my dream with Music lies
My heart beats with the Pen

[This message has been edited by elfin_tigress (05-17-2002 08:56 PM).]

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2002-05-16 01:01 PM



Their difference aura thin...

What a line!
Thank you!

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-05-17 12:41 PM


I guess I missed your first post.  If it was as good as this it is my loss
Welcome to passions.  I look forward to more of your work>

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-05-17 12:53 PM


elfin_tigress
Welcome and I enjoyed your post.

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4 posted 2002-05-17 01:21 PM


If this is you brand new, I can't wait t' see what a few weathered years here will do t' your words. *drooling* Yum!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Martie
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5 posted 2002-05-17 08:56 PM


For though my dream with Music lies
My heart beats with the Pen

But, can you not have both?

Zinsser
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6 posted 2002-05-25 09:38 AM


very nice....
enjoyed
~~Connie~~

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