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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-05-16 11:54 AM


existentialist
I need to make love to you
for a few hours

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-16 12:01 PM



With this lovely
it most certainly has a right
to be a milestone along
the road of poetry...

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2 posted 2002-05-16 12:22 PM


ohhh this is good stuff my friend! happy 5555th!
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3 posted 2002-05-16 12:30 PM


WOW.....


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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4 posted 2002-05-16 12:39 PM


Interloper
Good one, enjoyed

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5 posted 2002-05-16 01:19 PM


OH MY...WOW!!
Yes, most certainly 5555 is one heck of a milestone!!
~Congrats and Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2002-05-16 01:36 PM


Dear Poet....if it isn't already a milestone...I believe you have just made it one with this wonderful post!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-05-16 01:50 PM


Well, happy 5562, anyway.

*arrived late*

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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8 posted 2002-05-16 01:58 PM


Lady ~
Many heartfelt thanx.

Rosepetal ~
You're 1derful  

Lauren ~
{sigh}   Now that I've melted how am I ever going to pen a decent piece again?

Sy ~
Thank you for dropping by my friend  

Enchantress ~
You are almost too good to be true

Nightshade ~
You have made my day for sure

bs ~
It WAS number 5555, I promise.  Obviously our posts update even previous posting numbers ... Anyway, thanks for the read  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (05-16-2002 02:00 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-05-16 02:23 PM




(giggles in delight) Yes, yes, 5555 is a wonderful milestone ineed, I love it! (big hugggsssss) This piece made me smile, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-05-16 09:18 PM


this is very well written, but i have to say, 5555 is not a milestone.
add 2222 more.

when you hit 7777, you get the special "Lucky Seven" attack and hit for 7777 damage a hit for the rest of the battle.

oh, wait. this isn't Final Fantasy 7.

right.

ok, then:
happy milestone!
lol.
-Dave

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11 posted 2002-05-16 09:24 PM


Every poem is a milestone in my book...at least the good ones. This certainly qualifies
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12 posted 2002-05-16 09:29 PM


Bob darling boy this is outstanding writing, as always you excel at whatever you write. Fabulous writing and this is such a worthy milestone post

Congratulations on
5 5 5 5
WELL DONE


Utterly utterly wonderful writing YOU darling boy never disappoint. Wonderful absolutely perfect poetry, YOU do know I utterly utterly love it don’t you? Of course you do.

Sorry I’m after the fair darling boy but You know I would have been here earlier if I could. So now it’s happy 5568 xxx Do you forgive me? Mushy flutters eyelashes and smiles winningly and blows a kiss for good measure


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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13 posted 2002-05-16 09:34 PM


InterLoper~


A FEW HOURS my butt
Get in here and let's make it
An all night affair~


*Hugs* n' a *giggle* or two~
You etched your 5555 wonderfully~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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14 posted 2002-05-17 12:16 PM



Any poem from you IS a milestone   And this senryu certainly is tops!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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15 posted 2002-05-17 12:17 PM


5, 55, 555, 5555, wonderful one minute at a time...helen
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16 posted 2002-05-17 11:09 AM


Noah ~
Where would I be without your support?

Dave ~
OK.  I'll try to do better when I reach 7777

Michael ~
High approbation indeed.  Thanx my friend

Mushy ~
What's to forgive.  You are just too dear to me for me to be upset with anything you do

Marge ~
from hours to days
making love has benefits
grinning in a daze

Melissa ~
{sigh} and {sigh} again.  Be still my heart...

Helen ~
start with a second
the we work up to minutes
hours ... then the daze

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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17 posted 2002-05-17 04:07 PM


Oooooooooh.  Glad I got in here when I did.

Admiring you at Passions.

Martie
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18 posted 2002-05-17 06:27 PM


Of course it is!!
walker
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19 posted 2002-05-17 07:01 PM


Words chosen so wisely, is what make you a great poet.
Gemini
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20 posted 2002-05-17 08:17 PM


555 is a milestone, this superlative! Congrats!
Titia Geertman
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21 posted 2002-05-17 08:43 PM




I'm here and all yours
Simply can't resist such wish
coming from your heart

Simply gorgeous this senryu of yours

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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22 posted 2002-05-17 08:58 PM


A good number, Interloper...
Congratulations...

I can't wait to see what you will do when you get to 6666

~ congratulatory hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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23 posted 2002-05-17 10:40 PM


Poem of few words..well said.
Sandra

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with you
24 posted 2002-05-20 01:36 PM


come here and love me
forget the clock on the wall
let the hours pass

~*~

until satisfied
time does not exist for us
only slow lovin




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25 posted 2002-05-20 02:34 PM


Right on interloper! Right on!  Milestone it is!
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