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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-05-16 08:12 AM


Dreams Reunite


I listened for the sound of you
shadow-stepping, coming near.
But in the darkness all I heard
was sounds of heartbeat, mine so clear.

Pounding out those rhythms strong,
wishing I could touch a kiss.
I opened up a window for
a breeze of you, in reminisce.

It caught me as I settled in
and spun me 'round to dizzy me.
I felt encircled by your arms
the hold of you, in want to be.

I watched for you to come to me
eye-thoughts penetrating night.
Delusioned I, for it was you
who dared to cross these lips' invite.

Once again, as always seems
I fondle warmly in your know.
In the silence of the hour,
these hazel eyes on blues bestow.

They pledge to you, their gift of love,
their bounty driven by nights embrace.
Those dreams unfold and press their will
subsuming all 'til morns replace.

I felt the breeze come over me
and sway my thoughts to softly light
upon the darkness, shadow's touch,
on wings, I fly, dreams reunite.


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


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BloomingRose
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1 posted 2002-05-16 08:46 AM


I felt the breeze come over me
and sway my thoughts to softly light
upon the darkness, shadow's touch,
on wings, I fly, dreams reunite
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is simply beautiful. Enjoyed.

Deb

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-05-16 09:16 AM


Maureen,
A lovely soft breeze, enjoyed

Muys
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since 2002-04-06
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The Netherlands
3 posted 2002-05-16 09:49 AM


Dear
Every morning I opened my window
I felt the breeze come over my
and my heart jumt.
I love it
Hugs Muys

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-05-17 11:54 AM


They pledge to you, their gift of love,
their bounty driven by nights embrace.
Those dreams unfold and press their will
subsuming all 'til morns replace.
=======
You are on a roll, Maureen, and I love it!
Write on, girl

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marsha
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5 posted 2002-05-17 09:56 PM


Maureen darling girl this is absolutely stunning poetry, beautiful it flows with wonder across the page, illuming and brightening the spirit. Truly outstanding writing. You are a fabulous writer, your use of language and form are divine, you know I love this utterly utterly love it. Perfect poetry of the heart and soul This positive sings in my soul excellent writing your pen is really magic


Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Logan
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6 posted 2002-05-17 10:07 PM


Ahhh, Maureen, those breezes always do get to me, and you have wrapped that breeze around all of us..very well done..very gentle smile
ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-05-17 10:22 PM


This write rustled with the wings of romance and desire. Exceptional. ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-05-17 11:21 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may true loves magic always sing in your heart and sweep you off your feet into the most magical dreams ever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-05-18 05:43 AM


Very nice..lots of feelings and desire...James
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2002-05-18 10:48 AM


A very lovely soft remembering M.  As always, with your personal touch and style.  You are good ya know??  

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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