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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Underneath in the darkness I see something to anyone else it may seem like nothing but it’s there all the same and I must know so I start touching it exploring this spot scratching at the surface picking at it till before I know it there it is something underneath all that paint |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the true color...what vision to see in the dark and see something that others can't...! I love this one, very well written. |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
'Tis absolutely my favorite thing about yard sales...and finding that antique lamp that hasn't shown it's beauty for eons.  The simple symbolism one can attach to this writing is gigantic. I really liked this poem, 1slick_lady. I definately know there is "something under that paint". Very Cool! ~Sydney McLean |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
D'ya think that applies to people too, hmm? I love it. Go get 'em  |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Scratch away at a heart and find a soul. Scratch away at a soul and know its essence. I love the search. Well done Dear Lady. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes...a search for truth. More than "good" writing Helen! excellent flow and metaphor...wish I wrote this... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, this poem reminded me of my signature quote I use from Shakira from Underneath Your Clothes, it's a song all about finding something special deep inside of a man and seeing his heart as her territory. (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, may you always find true peace and light from within all the darkness in loves heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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