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Snowdwen
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0 posted 2002-05-15 02:03 PM


Snow....
Its the calm in a winters night.
Storm.....
Its the warmth in rain that freezes...
Sun....
Its the warmth in your heart.
Summer....
Its our innerchild...
But.....
Snowie Storm....
Is to desier...
The Fire that steams the...
Rain...
The clouds that Hide the Sun.
The Summer that turns into Snow!
Snow that mends a broken soul...
the Fire that it melts.

(I wrote this in the Treasure Bay casino. When I went to see my friend Jenn in Mississippi. On the14 of may 2002.)


"Day and night, one in the same, Darkness is my Destiny."


[This message has been edited by Snowdwen (05-15-2002 09:10 PM).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2002-05-15 03:35 PM


it's amazing what a change of scenery can do. . .

this moves on a lot of planes. . . I like it. . .

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2 posted 2002-05-15 08:43 PM




(smiles) Wow, this is a wonderful and interesting write, sweet friend, we have all missed you and your wonderful words so much, may this snow and rain always calm the fires of your heart and kiss all your pain away! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michelle, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Snowdwen
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3 posted 2002-05-16 02:55 PM


Thank you Sven. A change of scenery is what I needed even more than I thought. Being with a friend helped me out alot and I had a great time!


Mistletoe Angel, You have no idea how good it feels to be back. I like to write, but sometimes it just takes a little more than it should for me to post my work. I do plan to post more soon. I thank you for your kind words, and I'm more than sure the "snow" will calm what burns within myself.

Love ya both!
Michell

"Day and night, one in the same, Darkness is my Destiny."



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