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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 2002-05-15 11:15 AM



I stand in a meadow.
The melody of her voice weaves
Subtle webs around me;
I am held captive by her
Searchlight eyes.

Don't emancipate me.
Don't emancipate me.
Don't emancipate me.
I'm happy where I am.

Please don't free me.
Please don't free me.
Please don't free me.
Please don't free me.
Why?
Don't wanna be lonely.

Don't wanna be free of
Don't wanna be free of
Don't wanna be free of
Love.

So Mister Stovepipe Hat Man
I hopes you understand
That I am held captive by her
Searchlight eyes,
And I am happy where I am.


Alicat

© Copyright 2002 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 2002-05-15 11:18 AM


  I love this one!  I knew it - I knew it would be this one!  You canna fool me mister.  I miss reading you - there's so much up in that noggin' o' yours.  

Hugs
~me

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
2 posted 2002-05-15 11:19 AM



I think you need to bring
back more of the treasures
for those who have not yet
delighted in the experience

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2002-05-16 04:36 PM


Smiling here...This is a beautiful piece and it's nice to see your presence again
Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX
4 posted 2002-05-16 04:50 PM


You know that the first time that you read it for me I was filled with this deep unexplainable joy and now even more the second time.  For there are words that fill pages and not said between two from time to time, but there is knowledge in there writtings that will never change.

So thank you once again for posting such a wonderful piece and I will put it in my library and hold it deep to me.

Love Always(I said I would),
Ladycat


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

[This message has been edited by Ladycat (05-16-2002 04:51 PM).]

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